Thursday, January 16, 2014

Journal: "Still I rise"





                                                                                                Source: www.firstcover.com

"Still I rise"

by Maya Angelou


I can feel the poet’s miserable and dangerous life, but also I can see her strong will and hope to stand and overcome the struggle. While I was reading the poem, I imagined a rocking doll, which never falls down and always bounces back up. Through the powerful and hopeful poem, the author depicts the suffering of segregation which black people encountered, and conveys black people’s robust will to overcome strife. As mentioned in the marginal notes of the poem, I agree that the repetition of the phrase, “I rise” not only emphasizes the author’s deep and fervent spirit and shows her intensified will, but also creates rhythm in the poem. Furthermore, there is a rhyme scheme “A-B-C-B.” The scheme is not apparent in every stanza, but most of the stanzas in the poem follow this scheme. This creates rhythm, too. In the poem, the author puts forward some questions and specifically addresses these questions to the reader through the use of the word ”you”. This direct approach makes the poem more powerful, forcing readers to be involved in the piece and reflect on themselves. I think the poet is confronting white people who are racists, because near the end, the author refers to herself as “a black ocean,” which implies her skin color, and alludes to her race’s grievous history. In the poem, the author employs diverse literary devices: simile, metaphor, allusion, and motifs. Through simile and metaphor, she describes herself and her actions. For example, the similes “like dust,” and “like air” represent the author’s desire to break from the oppression and be free from restraint. In addition, through allusion, she delineates her racial background and history. For instance, I agree with the marginal notes that state “Out of the huts of history’s shame” is an example of allusion suggesting slavery. Also, I think “bringing the gifts that my ancestors gave” is another allusion to slavery. However, I don’t agree that “I am the dream and the hope of the slave” is personification as noted. Personification gives non-living things human qualities or characteristics, but this phrase compares “I” to “the dream and the hope of slave”. Actually, this is a metaphor. The poem’s motifs are expressed through repetition. On one hand, white people have constantly oppressed black people and treated them cruelly. This theme is expressed through the repetition of “You may…with your…” such as “You may kill me with your hatefulness.” Despite this, black people have constantly endured and overcome such hatred. This resilience is clearly evident through the repetition of “I rise”, and “I’ll rise” through out the poem. This poem is very thought – provoking and emotional expression of strength.

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